17.6.09

CREATIVE WRITING

Creative Writing: One evening last summer...

One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive through the forest. Then from out of nowhere a spaceship came. Weeb, weeb, weeb! Jim and Debbie hid behind a bush but it was no good, the aliens saw them. Luckily they were nice aliens. One was called Ding Dong because he slept with an alarm clock on all day. The other alien was called Tavooscy because that’s what everybody called him.

“Do you want to come to Zozspliespok?” the aliens asked. “Yes”, said Debbie. So they all went to Zozspliespok. There were aliens everywhere. There were computers, playstations and DSs. They all had a sleepover and the next morning Tavooscy was standing over Jim and Debbie. “Run away!” they shouted.

Jim and Debbie ran back to the spaceship and they flew back home. They ran into the house. Just then Jim’s mum came in. She asked “Why is there an alien’s spaceship in the backyard?” “Long story, long story mum!”

By William F

2 comments:

  1. I liked writing the Jim and Debbi stories
    from yasmina

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  2. Cooi sory oscar.

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