We are learning to write shape poems using alliterations and similes:
Funny Tuatara.
Hides safely under its hole like a mouse.
Scaly skin. Spikes sharper than a tooth.
Lazy like an owl.
Harry
Beautiful birds bouncing in your backyard.
Chirping in the air charming songs.
Like a small balloon bouncing in the breeze.
Yasmina
Humpback whale. Fat and as big as the world.
Flipping and floating like a dolphin.
Likes to find food. Funky animal.
Jordan
Funny Tuatara.Hides safely under its hole like a mouse.
Scaly skin. Spikes sharper than a tooth.
Lazy like an owl.
Harry
Beautiful birds bouncing in your backyard.Chirping in the air charming songs.
Like a small balloon bouncing in the breeze.
Yasmina
Humpback whale. Fat and as big as the world.Flipping and floating like a dolphin.
Likes to find food. Funky animal.
Jordan
What fantastic poems room 14! You have done a great job of using alliteration and similies to create wonderful pictures with your words.
ReplyDeleteBecky (Toby's mum)
Wow! What amazing poetry! I am a teacher in Nova Scotia, Canada looking for some ideas and inspiration for poetry with my students and I came upon your site! I love the paintings with the poems! WHAT TALENTED KIDS!!
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