28.10.09

MASKED PARADE: POETIC WRITING

I felt hot and bothered.
I had dancing ants in my pants.
I heard very loud shouting, stamping feet to the music and lots of chatterboxes.
It looked like everyone taking pictures and cheering.
It smelled like hot crispy salty chips and steaming sausages.

By Eva




I heard people having conversations about how cool and beautiful the masks were.
I saw people looking out for their kids and taking photos.
I smelled the candy floss, pink fluffy candy floss. Yum.


By Mackensey

1 comment:

  1. Cool poems room 14! The masked parade looked lots of fun. We liked your poems so much we decided do some poems like that ourselves. If you want to read them, have a look at our blog NOW...or later!
    From Toby

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