30.4.09

MAUI AND THE SUN

WE ARE LEARNING TO RETELL A STORY:
MAUI AND THE SUN

Maui and his brothers and the villagers didn’t get enough time to do their chores because of the sun going too fast. Maui said he was going to catch the sun but his brothers said he couldn’t. Maui told the villagers to weave a net so he could catch the sun.

Maui and his brothers went to find the sun. They could feel the sun coming towards them. The men pulled the sun down towards them and then Maui attacked the sun. The sun asked Maui why he was trying to catch him. “So you will go slowly,” said Maui.

Maui let the sun go and everyone was proud of him. Now the sun went slower and they all had time to do their chores.

By Desiah



1 comment:

  1. Good writing and nice retelling Desiah. You picked some good words to describe when the sun got caught.

    From Room 9

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